DannyP's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pixel NG Tank]

Poor

Rather sloppy, poor technique. It looks like you just traced it or something. When remaking things as pixel art, there are some details you need to simplify - they won't always look good if you try to do them exactly the same. Whole bunch of rough lines here... pixel art needs to be clean.

[Robot Idle]

Sorta amusing

The dancing thing is good, but this looks rather poorly made. You shouldn't use so many unnecessary colours in pixel art.

Daverom responds:

why?

[Trigger]

Cool

Description made me laugh a little. Awesome drawing. He sorta reminds me of Marth, though... like, an evil version.

kiiryu responds:

Actually, he was originally inspired by Daryun off of "The Heroic Legend of Arslan"
http://users.atw.hu/johnim/nemonic/pictures/Arslan%20Senki.jpg
HE looks like marth. (the guy on the right)

I saw it when I was like 7, so it had a big impact on the designs of most of my characters.

[Fighter]

Short

He looks short... I dunno if that was intended. I'd like it better if his legs were a bit longer. The colours used remind me of Final Fantasy Tactics. The design is sweet. The higher hand looks smaller than the hand with the sword, or at least the fingers don't look to be the same thickness.

kiiryu responds:

I think he looks short because the thing around his waist is too low. And yeah, I agree with you on the hands.

[Bei Fong Toph]

Awesome

I'm not entirely sure how I feel about those pencil-like lines... Other than that, this looks awesome. I had no idea where this character was from until I looked at some of the reviews; now you've got me tempted to watch Avatar.

kevinsano responds:

pencil-like? They're just pencil XD

Glad you liked it, now go watch Avatar :D

[Pokemon B&W female trainer]

Good

It's good, but that blush looks overdone and out of place. I think the legs look very thick considering how young this character looks.

kevinsano responds:

yea, I tried something new with the blushes, but leave them legs alone D:

[Ryuk]

The name

I'd change the name since "Ryuk" isn't really a name and is pretty much unique to Death Note. If you want it to sound Japanese or something, you should put some hiragana/katakana together and pronounce it like that (you can't end something with just "k" in Japanese). Anyhow, it's an original character, so you should make an original name, too.

As for the picture itself, it's pretty good. Those lines/muscles on the neck don't make much sense, though. From what I know, they go from behind your ears down to the middle of your collar bone. The lines on the inside are doing that alright, but the one more to the right sure isn't. I don't think the muscle should be that defined when this character is relaxing like this, though; I'd personally only show one set of lines, not both.
The raised arm looks like it's too close to the body; the angle you have it on might even be impossible, but I'm not entirely sure.

The hand, hair, and face look very good, though the mouth looks a little off center. The colouring is quite nice.

[Sewing a Model]

Good

Kinda disturbing. Looks quite good overall. I think the blush on the sewer is a bit much, though. Also, I think her ear should be moved over the left... It should be, like, in line with where her jaw ends, I believe.

exninja123 responds:

thanks! :)

[Nardog]

kind of want

id wear it wen its added

ReserveNote responds:

o u