DannyP's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BC episode 1]

I already saw this...

What happened to it from when you submitted it before...? I don't remember if the voices were different before or not. Well, I liked it before and I still like it now. It's funny, I'd like to see more episodes. You'll have to find the blam page on the old one 'cause I don't remember what critique I had and I don't feel like analyzing it again.

jossospro responds:

My voice acting was so terrible, so I wanted to give this movie another chance. I deleted the old one.

[The Sakazakis Episode 1]

Not bad; needs sync set to stream

There are two huge problems here. The first is the lack of preloader. You can get one at newgrounds.com/downloads/preloaders/
The second is the voices going out of sync. To fix this, open the Properties panel in Flash. Click on the frames you have sounds on. At the bottom-right area of the Properties panel, there are sync options. It's usually on "Event" by default, which makes the sound play and then end when it ends. What you want is the option "Stream", which makes the sound play exactly with the movie (unless you manage to create some lag); if you pause the movie, the sounds will also pause with this setting.

The drawings were a little rough, but not bad. The movie was pretty amusing overall.

"Because your last name is Garcia", lol.

[Enjoy Your Heaven]

Good work

Well made and quite entertaining. I liked the way we gradually learned about what he did. There's not much to say that hasn't already been said in other reviews.
On an unimportant note, why not co-author the musician and sound guy? It's sorta inconvenient copy+pasting links from the comments and deleting the space. You might as well put your YouTube channel as your website for easy access while you're at it.

[Candy Store]

Nice one

There's a nice charm to your movies that I don't seem to ever see in modern stuff.

[Kaiblade Episode 4]

Could use some fine-tuning

It was pretty good, though I don't get it entirely since I haven't seen any of the other episodes yet. The animation was pretty cheap overall, but I liked that you drew them in different poses when characters were shown talking again rather than just recycling the first talking drawing. I think you should do some shading to increase the overall quality.
Some of the drawings were inconsistent and certain animation sequences didn't quite look smooth/natural. For example, that skull pin on that chick's hair was missing at one point. I dunno, some of it just looked like you might've rushed, but I suppose that might be a good idea. Better to get episodes released than not at all due to being picky over details.

Voice actors were pretty good. The song at the end should fade out rather than stop abruptly.

It's cool that you're making a little series like this.

CartoonCoffee responds:

-There was some shading, more so in the begining but as the project dragged out I felt it was taking to long and just decided to get it done.
-And i'm aware that there was inconsistency. That was mainly because I was experiment they way I wanted the characters to look.
-Unfortunately for the skull pin i often forget about that accessory

Thanks for the review

[Duality Complete]

Cool

Smooth animation, nice backgrounds. Cool style overall. Not much else to say; it seems like you know what you're doing.
The file size, reduced quality, and lack of preloader are sorta unfortunate.

Weenog responds:

yeah, it is unfortunare... turns out having it converted from an mp4 lowers the quality lots.
thanks for the review.

[A Present From Me to You]

Funny

There could be some more detail in the backgrounds and maybe just in general, especially since it's so short. It was funny, though. I sure didn't see that coming.

Ashmic responds:

thanks but judging from all the horrible comments im not even submitting anything anymore, that nidorina1 and sepphtmage did it, im so, fuck it i don't even wanna be on newgrounds anymore thanks for being nice i guess

[XIN Session 18 (Finale)]

Needs to be in Flash Portal History 2006

The art is pretty sloppy, especially in earlier episodes. Recycled drawings, cheap lip syncing (not as bad in this episode), looping bits of fight scenes, still frame character scrolling on coloured line backgrounds...

However, the story and characters were pretty interesting. The art and animation weren't top notch, but they told the story well. I dunno, there isn't much specific positive stuff to say... It was just awesome overall. The fight scenes, too.
Legend was really cool.

[Trapped in an Escape Game]

Brilliant

Though I'm not really a fan of non-animated videos on Newgrounds, this was just brilliant and needed to be live action. The ticking and inventory system were great things to add in, and that was just awesome when you pulled the box out of the cabinet. Haha, is this how we get trapped in the games? You think you're just walking into a freezer room or closet after your associate walks out and BAM!

[Another Day Seven]

Another nightmare

Poor Blue Rabbit... From the other episodes, it seems like he lives in a pretty peaceful place with a comfortable life, but then there's this, Nightmare, and how he wanted to beat up those bullies before. In such a generally happy series, where is his darkness coming from?