DannyP's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Templar]

Could use a better background

I like how you shade with solid black. Quite a few of the lines look pretty rough or rushed, but I like how that looks, too. I don't think it would have the same cartoony charm with clean lines.
Cool design and stuff. I think the thumbs could maybe use some work, but the hands look pretty good otherwise.

StoneFeather responds:

Thanks :D I tried to make the lines look rough, but I do understand the background needing to be made better.

[Elements of Chibi]

I like the simplicity

I think it's a pretty good picture, but you should try making different backgrounds rather than just using this orange/yellow exciting sunrise thingy all the time.
Also, I think it looks bad how you have the pirate cut off at the bottom and the zombie cut off on the bottom and to its left. Like, we can see the background where it should be covered... You should crop those edges of the picture, methinks.

StoneFeather responds:

Thanks for your helpful criticism, I chose the background because the first four were quick works, and the poor crop job on the left and bottom were due to Flash crapping out on me and not being able to do a final crop.

[Trigger]

Cool

Description made me laugh a little. Awesome drawing. He sorta reminds me of Marth, though... like, an evil version.

kiiryu responds:

Actually, he was originally inspired by Daryun off of "The Heroic Legend of Arslan"
http://users.atw.hu/johnim/nemonic/pictures/Arslan%20Senki.jpg
HE looks like marth. (the guy on the right)

I saw it when I was like 7, so it had a big impact on the designs of most of my characters.

[Bei Fong Toph]

Awesome

I'm not entirely sure how I feel about those pencil-like lines... Other than that, this looks awesome. I had no idea where this character was from until I looked at some of the reviews; now you've got me tempted to watch Avatar.

kevinsano responds:

pencil-like? They're just pencil XD

Glad you liked it, now go watch Avatar :D

[Sewing a Model]

Good

Kinda disturbing. Looks quite good overall. I think the blush on the sewer is a bit much, though. Also, I think her ear should be moved over the left... It should be, like, in line with where her jaw ends, I believe.

exninja123 responds:

thanks! :)