DannyP's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Genjuro (samurai shodown)]

Poor header

That's a lousy header... the file size is way too big, so it takes a while to load. I suspect that uncompressed music file is to blame for that.
The animation looked kind of OK, but it was really slow, repetitive, and boring.

braxius responds:

thats because i included the sound inside of the header, i my website its streamed

[Naruto-Namikaze Satellite]

Not too good...

Namikaze Satellite is my favourite Naruto opening, and you didn't do it justice...
Graphics - Sprites... I'm fine with sprites... but you really should have edited some of them (like when they're staring at the starry sky, you could have made them sitting and looking up...). You seemed pretty lazy; didn't modify sprites to make them how they are in the real deal.
Style - I'm not sure how style is supposed to be rated, but I'll just compare this to the actual opening. At some parts you used the sprites to look like the actual opening, but then there were other bits (like Naruto and Iruka) which had no part in the opening whatsoever. If you're gonna do the opening, do it right, y'know?
Sound - I noticed you edited the full version of the song... or at least that's how it sounded. You should have found a TV size version of the song, and if you can't find it, record it from the actual thing.
Violence - Don't think there was really any?
Humor - You excluded that hilariously ugly picture of Shikamaru they show in the actual opening... And all those other pictures they shaded in the opening which made everyone look creepy/ugly.
Overall - Sort of resembled the actual opening at times, but not really... try modifying or creating your own sprites; the ones you had to work with didn't do this movie justice.

Goten-2 responds:

Graphics-Well the thing is, i SUCK at sprite editting, so...
Style-If I would've done everything like the actual intro, it would just be a plain rip-off, right?I just wanted to kinda make my own version, but put some parts of the actual intro in, so it is yet recognisable.
Sound-Yeah, it's the full version cut up, I couldn't find the TV version and don't have a program to record it, sorry.
Violence-No, and it doesn't have to^^
Humor-Kinda the same from 'Style'
Overall-Look at all of the above. XD

[Ultimate Naruto Fanflash5]

Good

Lip syncing was much better than the previous ones, and your graphics/animation are looking good.

[Ultimate Naruto FanFlash]

Decent

Funny usage of the music with the characters, but your lip syncing was simply awful... I like your graphics, but you seem to get pretty lazy when animating (ex: motion tweening Tsunade across the screen instead of making her walk). Overall pretty good.

[(Naruto) Akatsuki Safari]

Wow...

Graphics - Pretty simple, overall decent
Style - Pretty good
Sound - The sound quality was really bad
Violence - I don't think there was any? I dunno...
Interactivity - Definately needs a preloader, a play button at the least
Humor - Good use of music with Naruto characters
Overall - Wow... way overrated. Over 300 reviews, over 200 thousand views, score of 4.13... I mean, it was an OK movie, but wow... With the poor sound quality, less-than excellent graphics, and no play button/preloader, I'm surprized this got such a high score. I'd overall say this movie was OK.

[ludas animans Ep. 7]

Oh man...

I was just looking through some of my replied-to reviews, then I found Ludas Animans ep6 pt4 and decided to boost some scores, because damn, those were excellent movies. Then on your Flash work list I saw episode 7?! So I go to it, see it was uploaded around 2 weeks ago. Then I notice the score isn't very high and there are barely any reviews! So I click to watch the movie, the movie's screen pops up, and then it's just a black screen where the Flash movie should be and it says "Flash movie not loaded..." if I right click. I'm downloading the movie to my computer using the file's URL and some HTML since I can't watch it here, but you really have to find out what's wrong with the loading screen... I'm betting this is something everyone should see, just like the previous episodes.

All right, just finished watching. That was freakin' amazing! I just can't even begin to describe how excellent that was. It's just way too bad the movie didn't load for a lot of people... this movie would probably have a way higher score. Keep up the excellent work man.

KNanakase responds:

10/27/2006 11:58am

Yeah, I'm at a loss at what's wrong with the loading for some people. I don't know what version you downloaded since I just uploaded it's 4th or 5th version like thirty minutes ago. I'm still trying to pin point problem. I don't want to work on the next episode until I can resolve this problem...

Since you've watched it, though, I'm happy you liked it. *sighs*

[Bill Nye the Science Guy!]

It's alright

The graphics weren't very good, but sorta decent. It's been quite a while since I've heard that song, which is where you got points from me.

[V.G. Short]

Good

Good, but add subtitles; it was hard to understand what that robot was saying.

[dream-dragons v2.2!]

Ehh...

It looked OK, but there were some major problems.
For one, you stopped colouring the dragons after the reached a certain point on the screen? Why did they just go transparent like that?
For two, it looks as though you just drew one dragon doing its little motion and put it all into one Movie Clip symbol. You then just copied and pasted it around... Changing backgrounds and copy/pasting a dragon doesn't make a very impressive Flash movie.

heather-lanham responds:

that's right. it's a test, so I didn't put a lot of work into it. but I did want the idea of the dragons going transparent so that underlying patterns could be seen through them.
thank you for the input. obviously v.2 will have more work put into it, and it will be my finished version. this was just to get my idea out and see what all I could do to improve apon it before makeing a commitment.

[Mario Bloopers 2006]

Meh

I didn't like this very much, and it had a few typos (coming spelt as 'comming', bicycle spelt as 'bycicle'). Overall not bad, just not well suited for my tastes.

S-E5000 responds:

well sorry but evryone makes mistakes and im glad that its not bad