DannyP's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Templar]

Could use a better background

I like how you shade with solid black. Quite a few of the lines look pretty rough or rushed, but I like how that looks, too. I don't think it would have the same cartoony charm with clean lines.
Cool design and stuff. I think the thumbs could maybe use some work, but the hands look pretty good otherwise.

StoneFeather responds:

Thanks :D I tried to make the lines look rough, but I do understand the background needing to be made better.

[Elements of Chibi]

I like the simplicity

I think it's a pretty good picture, but you should try making different backgrounds rather than just using this orange/yellow exciting sunrise thingy all the time.
Also, I think it looks bad how you have the pirate cut off at the bottom and the zombie cut off on the bottom and to its left. Like, we can see the background where it should be covered... You should crop those edges of the picture, methinks.

StoneFeather responds:

Thanks for your helpful criticism, I chose the background because the first four were quick works, and the poor crop job on the left and bottom were due to Flash crapping out on me and not being able to do a final crop.

[Chick 03]

Very good

Your art looks very good and professional. Some of it seems like it might be too hardcore for the Art Portal, though, but I'm not sure. I'm not scouting you because of that, but good luck.

[Pixel NG Tank]

Poor

Rather sloppy, poor technique. It looks like you just traced it or something. When remaking things as pixel art, there are some details you need to simplify - they won't always look good if you try to do them exactly the same. Whole bunch of rough lines here... pixel art needs to be clean.