DannyP's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vete a la Versh 14]

Good

The only other work of yours I've seen until now was "Zelda - Target", and I was expecting this to be disappointing, but it was pretty funny and well made with good style.

[Blackout]

I like it

Music was weird, but I think it was fitting. The animation was pretty lazy. You could've moved the eyes or had them not showing when it should've been his back view rolling into the building. Having him turn to look at the powered down world around him would've made the animation a lot more interesting.
Did you make those backgrounds? They look very nice, though they're certainly a lot different than the simple colour/shape style the rest of the movie has. Plus respect if you made them, minus if you didn't.

It seems impossible for this robot to balance, but whatever to that.

Liked the movie overall. Could use some improvements, but I think it's good enough for my favourites.

[big battle 2]

Boring

Seeing Naruto and a Sonic face on the loading screen was an instant turn off. Sonic, Naruto, DBZ, and Bleach sprite movies have been done to DEATH.
I've made sprite movies before, so I know how easy it is, especially with the very well made modern sprites and websites dedicated to distributing the sprites. You don't have to do much work to make a sprite movie (especially with these popular series), and you really didn't. The movements were stiff/rigid. Contrary to the title, there was barely any fighting. This was stupid.
The movie made no sense. This site is in English and its audience is mostly English-speaking, so you should add English subtitles. Even so, there was hardly any dialogue, so I doubt it would make the story much better.

Make something worth watching next time. This has no heart or anything. It's just an effortless, empty sprite movie. Anyone could make this within an hour.

[[KK] Fatal Fantasy]

Not entirely convinced

Did you guys do the voices/script? That part was actually pretty good.

[DELIRI]

Messed up

The song and creepy inverts made me laugh, though it's sorta disturbing.

[One Week [Typography]]

Out of sync

I highly recommend fixing the sync issue ASAP. Open the file in Flash, go to the frame you have the music on, open the Properties panel, and set "Sync" to "Stream". This will make the audio pause when you pause the movie and it will keep it in sync with the movie. It will also allow you to listen to the song from any point when you're testing the movie in Flash (like, when you just press the Enter key without publishing the SWF file).
The text was fairly interesting, but it could've used some more pictures. I dunno, it's hard to say since it went so out of sync.

I also recommend crediting the song in your description or in the submission information. The latter is better since it promotes the musician better and links to an Amazon search for the band name, so you can sorta use that as an excuse if you ever get in trouble for using the song without permission.

Syreas responds:

Thank you so very much for your help! That made it a lot easier to edit. I appreciate it a lot and I hope you enjoy the improved version ^^

[The Film Scene Collab.]

Could be better

The animation wasn't exactly top-notch. There were quite a few still frames and recycled movie clips, it seemed. The Monsters Inc. one had pretty good detail, though it was just a few tweens.
It was sorta funny, though I haven't seen most of the movies in here. I liked the use of that excited Link meme thing (forgot the name) and the ghost's rhymes about mundane activities. The Advent Children thing was pretty alright, too.
As for the voice acting, if you aren't confident about doing convincing voices, I'd recommend checking out the Voice Acting Club. If not to get someone else to do voices, you could get some tips and critique there.

Mechabloby responds:

I'm glad you liked certain parts of our collab. I thought the voice acting was rather okay overall in everyone's parts (although, I admit myself that my yell at the end of the Twilight part was lame, and I joke about with it stating that at the end of the part).

Thanks for your review!

[Avoiding Blamnation (LL)]

Another Lock Day, another flood of... wait

The humour was decent and all the points were very true. I'd say it would be nice if every newb could see this, but that would mean making them sit through some generic Lock crap as far as the visuals and audio go. A good idea for a movie, a good script, and good use of screenshots. It's a shame this is a Lock movie.

Lock Day's turn out was about as good as what the shitty krew does daily. At least you guys usually put a little more effort in, but it's still the same old Lock/Clock/Glock/Sock/Block/Shock/Shl ock shit with basically no effort in animation, annoying machine voices instead of real voice acting, and the constant need to remind people "Hey, we used to pump garbage like this out on a very regular basis and we just wanted to remind everyone that Newgrounds remembers and acknowledges our name due to our INYOURPORTAL edge that any random group of idiots could copy (and they did!)."
I dunno how much you modified from your original, but the thought of it being any worse is a real put off. I'm guessing it's a clone, though. You didn't even change "Macromedia Flash" to "Adobe Flash".

JujubeLock responds:

The difference was the added flashing penis shots. "A good idea for a movie, a good script, and good use of screenshots. It's a shame this is a Lock movie." Someone sounds like a bigot.

[DaftPunkIsPlaying@MyHouse]

KK spam is more entertaining

Well, at least you have good taste in music.

[Geoweasel Episode 1]

Pretty funny

Rather cheap animation and the mouths looked like they were just looping (perhaps without any specific timing). Well, this is ancient. The jokes were good, but I don't feel the immediate need to see all the future episodes.

Geoweasel responds:

Yeah, they were just loops, to save time. Not that these took much time back then, haha. Thank you for the honest review, I really appreciate it.